Inspiration from Insomnia

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I didn't sleep at all last night, still running from yesterday.
But my tired state did provide me some inspiration- I started work on something new at about 5am-
a work in progress to be sure but I think it has potential


Be with me tonight Love

and we will watch The Dawn together 

I know how best to spend a sleepless night…

My arms around your waist to pull you closer

To feel a woman’s warmth against me

To kiss your neck, to feel your body stiffen

To look into your eyes and feel your lips gently pressed to mine.

Will you lay beside me?

To watch the moonlight dance?

 To see it shine on our clothes?

To see it reflected in our eyes?

To spend the night as lovers in spirit, not in flesh?

Rest here in my arms and I will rest in yours.

Stay with me Love, until the morning comes.

Playing with a few ideas here-
The first line has been rattling around in my brain for weeks.
I'm a romantic and enjoy the idea of two people in love being so comfortable around each other they fall asleep in each other's arms(fully clothed mind you).

It's been a while since I've written poetry, nice to do something different.
Lemme know what you think. 


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LemonBaconExplosion's avatar
That's sweet. Could use a few tweaks, but good imagery overall. I think society places a lot of emphasis on the sexual aspects of romance, not the actual love. Mainly, caring about someone enough to not mind their shortcomings, even embrace those shortcomings. At least that's how I see it.